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16 April 2007 @ 11:20 am
Fic- Fear  
Title: Fear
Fandom: House MD
Pairing: House/Wilson
Theme set: gamma of [info]13drabbles
Prompt: #11 - Power
Rating: PG-13 for language
Summary: House knew the source of Wilson's anger, and he suddenly was afraid.
Disclaimer: All characters belong to NBC Universal, David Shore, Katie Jacobs, Bad Hat Harry Productions and FOX.

A/N: Damn plot bunnies just won't leave me alone today.



He's never seen those beautiful brown eyes so dead and cold.

His shoulders still ached from Wilson slamming him hard against the wall of his office as he kissed him brutally.
"You son of a bitch." Wilson's voice was thick with disgust.
"You fucking son of a bitch."
The blood from his lips stained Wilson's cheek. House reached out to wipe it off gently, but Wilson avoided the contact and shoved his hand away.
"When will you ever learn to stop hurting people who love you?"
Wilson's handsome features suddenly grew distant even though he was merely a few centimeters away from him. His lips began to hurt, and House could feel the warm liquid inch toward his chin. House slid to the floor as Wilson released his grip on his t-shirt, the cane in his hand no longer capable of holding him up. His leg throbbed, his bottom lip stung, and his heart raced with fear when Wilson disappeared behind his office door and left him without looking back.
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rnwannabe[info]rnwannabe on April 16th, 2007 07:29 am (UTC)
YEOUCH!! So much power in so few words! Me likey!
Eternal Wings: [CSI:NY] [info]xguardianangelx on April 16th, 2007 03:49 pm (UTC)
The idea itself sure gave me a punch in the stomach, so I simply wrote out how it initially felt when I got inspired.

Thanks for reading =D
Tarlan: House - multi-color MD[info]tarlanx on April 16th, 2007 10:48 am (UTC)
Oh...such a lot of emotion in so few words! Excellent.
Eternal Wings[info]xguardianangelx on April 16th, 2007 03:47 pm (UTC)
Why thank you <3 So happy you like it~

Thanks for reading!!!
lookfar[info]lookfar on April 16th, 2007 11:11 am (UTC)
I think this is nice, detail-rich writing. A good idea, too. This -- "When will you ever learn to stop hurting those who love you?" -- doesn't sound genuine. I don't know many people who say "those," especially when they're upset. I think it would be "people," or "the ones."
Eternal Wings: [House] Wilson is oh so possessive.[info]xguardianangelx on April 16th, 2007 03:46 pm (UTC)
Now that you mention it, it does sound weird. Changed it~

I'm glad you like this piece~~
astarte59: House fade by iconclad[info]astarte59 on April 25th, 2007 01:13 am (UTC)
I like! The first sentence is awesome. I can never manage to write drabbles--can't stay under a hundred words. And you get so much across here. It's so intense and passionate, with Wilson's fury and disgust matched by the implied love he had for House before. I love the slow progression of the blood followed by House's own slide to the floor. Knowledge hurts.
Eternal Wings: [House] Wilson~<3[info]xguardianangelx on April 30th, 2007 12:00 am (UTC)
I can never manage to write drabbles--can't stay under a hundred words. And you get so much across here.
Why thank you <3

So glad you liked it :D I tried really hard to keep myself from being too wordy, because angst!fics hurt the most when they're short. Long ones tend to drag, and by the time the fic ends you'll be like, "huh? what???" *w*
nilhenwen: GREG!Bear[info]nilhenwen on June 25th, 2007 07:18 pm (UTC)
wow, this one really hits hard. I love the way you write. Even if you don't describe that much, like some writers write drabbles that are just description and like three words of narrative... but you're able to get so much into so few words by just keeping it simple and conveying eveything through subtext... somehow, but your fics just seem to have such feeling! It's like WOW!
I say! I may be stupid, but I'm not clever![info]mxdp on February 10th, 2008 11:54 pm (UTC)
Very powerful! Well done! and lovely avatar!
 
 

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